Concept Art: the development and final piece of ' Queen Red Riding Hood'

 while doing this scene I have come across two difficulties, firstly is the composition of the scene which was pointed out to me by my tutor who said that the vanishing point should never be on the edge of a page as it distorts the scene. taking his advice i enlarged the page and placed the vanishing point a bit more left enabling me to add the other side of the hall. overall i think this drastically changed the composition and looked more pleasing to the eye.
the second problem that occurred was with the hands as I kept getting comments on the size of the hands and that they didn't look feminine enough. i have struggled with specific problem for a couple of days now and have decide to see one of my family members who's an artist to give me some immediate advice.

After spending the afternoon with my relative we came to the conclusion that the former pose wasn't working even though we spent an hour or so working on the pose we had to change it as it seemed to cause many problems.
we talked about different poses which would beckon the audience to her, we looked at a variety on Disney film clips to get an idea of movement and different poses. so we settled on this pose which shows her being welcoming.
We kept the hands less detailed so they aren't so distracting as I want the viewer to be attracted to her face.
In conclusion I have had to make a few changes to this piece of artwork but i think its for the better the only thing I would change is the colour of the walls and roof as i think it can be seen as distracting from the character.